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Viral S. Trivedi
7:21 pm on Thursday, December 1, 2011
Hi James: I'm not sure who edited my story of My Home My Bangor but there is a sentence that is incorrect...could you please fix it? Here is the sentence: I scheduled my train time around noon or evening, I wouldn't be able to go until June 2nd or 3rd.
The correct sentence should be: I didn't scheduled my train time around noon or evening, because I knew I wouldn't be able to go until June 2nd or 3rd. I would make excuses to stay in Bangor.
Could you please make the correction because I am unable to?